While reading Chapter 1, Loomings, I was struck by the following quotation on page 4. “Posted like silent sentinels all around the town, stand thousands of mortal men fixed in ocean reveries.” The reason this sentence spoke to me in particular was just because of how beautiful it is. I particularly like the use of alliterations, in this case “silent sentinels” and “mortal men”. To be honest, this feels more like poetry than a line from a novel.
Later in the same paragraph this is expanded upon, when Melville, through the voice of Ishmael, says that “these are all landsmen”. None of them are carrier sailors, so, as Ishmael puts it “What do they here?” Especially because, at the time, the beach was not a recreational place. But I’d like to think that these people still saw beauty in it, although they weren’t brave enough to enter the waters. Maye they were just conptemplating the endlessness of the ocean, or the mythical beasts and sailors that ventured it’s endless waters.
In a lot of ways, we are those people. How many of us have actually spent time as crew on a ship? Most likely none of us. But, as people who live in San Diego, we tend to go to the beach at least every once in a while. Some people surf, or play in the waves. But some, like me, start attempting to read a book, but instead find ourselves staring at the waves, wondering if someone on the other side of the ocean is doing the exact same thing.
The ocean inspires all humans, in some way or form. Melville later writes about how it inspires the artist (like him). Because the vastness of the ocean is so unexplored, we can really run with our minds, imagining what lays in its depths. Who knows? There may even be mermaids.
This is strongest when you stick to the text and close read what it there, the first two paragraphs– stay there and push your interpretations based upon what the text gives you. Does the text invite you, the reader, to see yourself in these men? If so, where? Show us. Keep going!
Hi Caitlyn,
I like that you focus on the writing tools that Melville uses to create his style. Melville really makes us understand the ocean as something that has a strong magnetic pull to in us. He really sells the romanticism of the sea as something nothing short of magical. Creating a painting with language is no small task. I love that within the first chapter Melville already shows us why he is a master of the craft.
Hi Caitlyn, I really enjoyed reading your post as Chapter 1 was my favorite chapter out of the 3 from our reading this week. A point that you made regarding his separation of landsmen and to those with experience with the ocean such as sailors was very interesting. I think Melville holds the ocean very dear to his heart and you can tell by just the first chapter that he is big fan of the ocean and cherishes all its complexities and greatness. I also think that it was almost an enticing invitation for the readers to further explore the ocean to reach the level of love that he has for it.