Thinking about the final

For my final project, I wanna piece together the thoughts I had throughout the semester so it ties together towards a bigger statement about this book/why its important and still is. I will go through my old blog posts/essays to get some ideas, but i definitely want to focus on Moby Dick and how its messages from the 1800s are super relevant today. I wanna stick to a more modern lens/interpretation with this book in my essay.

That’s all I really have so far right now, I honestly get my ideas while I am writing so once I start with a thesis I’ll hopefully have more details to post about!

Week 13: Final Project

What do you still need to learn/do for your final project?

I feel like there’s so much that I still need to learn before diving into my final project. I’m planning to write a creative poem that touches on how Moby Dick directly responds to Emerson’s call for the “American Scholar,” incorporating form and direct quotes from both Melville’s novel and Emerson’s lecture to create a complete work that illustrates the call-and-response relationship between the two. I’m sort of ping ponging between what actual form and structure to use for the poem and the specifics of what I want to say, how to say it, and then the actuality of how to present it. I think it’s hard because poetry sometimes clicks into place and feels right in a particular form, so I need to play around with it a little bit more. Additionally, I need to reread Emerson’s work and revisit the several moments in Melville’s novel that I tabbed for their connection.

Thanksgiving Week

What do you need to do/learn for your final project?

For my final project, I am thinking about close reading the bay/boat when I go to my next sailing class, and writing something about that. Whenever I am at that class, I always think about Moby Dick because of how boring it is. We are using the wind to sail as they did back then, and I swear it is the most boring thing ever. We rig the boat, and then sail around Mission Bay for like an hour, and all I think is that everyone on that boat in Moby Dick must’ve been on the border of insanity and I can understand why Ahab lost it. Because staring at the water going by, the sunlight reflecting off of it, and literally nothing happening except just trying to catch wind and steer somewhere, is horribly boring. I think I want to observe this boredom in parallel to the chapters in Moby Dick that are, also, dreadfully boring, dragging on, slowly floating through page after page of nothingness.

I think sailing also gave me a lot of context for this novel. Even though it was just on the bay, it did allow me to imagine how it would be if the water just stretched on and on for miles, as well as how fluid of a state the water is in. I can always reach down and touch it, but it never stays in one place.

We’re on the home stretch

What you still need to learn/do for your final project?

So, I already have a strong idea of what creative project I want to do for my final paper, I’m just solidifying my thesis statement for the paper portion of it. I’m planning to re-read Chapter 42: The Whiteness of the Whale in the next couple of days so that I can have a solid foundation to build upon.

For the creative project, I found a beautiful set of book ends that are the head and the tail of a sperm whale. I was initially thinking of taking the head and using Paper-Mache to envelop it in every page from Chapter 42, then have the forehead read “It was never about a whale.” It would be set either inside of the book at Chapter 42 or — using both ends — I would have them as the literal book ends on a copy of Moby Dick. This works as a kind of physical manifestation of what people perceive Moby-Dick to be about, wrapped in the chapter that is the most well known of the book.

Through this project, I argue that Melville uses the whale to critique the expectations readers bring to the symbols – showing that the whale is never simply a whale, but a surface onto which meaning is compulsively imposed. The whiteness that terrifies Ishmael arises not from the animal itself but from the human impulse to project significance onto what fundamentally resists understanding. By wrapping the whale in the physical text of Chapter 42, my artwork materializes Melville’s insight that the White Whale’s terror is generated through the very act of interpretation.

As a kind of related aside: I read once that to understand the social commentary of a horror novel, you need to remove the monster from it. Whatever story you have left is really what the story is about. With Moby-Dick, which monster would you have to remove to understand the commentary on — Ahab or Moby-Dick? Or are either of them truly to blame for the events of the novel?

My biggest takeaway from this novel is that there is so much we cannot ever know, but there is so much that we can miss on our first read through. There are so many strands that Melville is weaving here, from the aspect of race, slavery, nation, capitalism, obsession, etc. there’s so much that you can see in this book. I want to try and read the book again with a different focus each time so that I can see what changes in my perception of the book.

Week 13: Blog Post

What you still need to learn/do for your final project:

I am hoping I can learn from all of the comments our Professor has left on both of my essays about close reading! I want to be able to close read 2 or maybe 3 passages for my final project to show why what I am creating matters! I have never done close reading to this extent before, so I want to put my all into this last project to prove my point for my creative project! I hope everyone will enjoy it as much as I have been enjoying making it! I hope my essay will show the importance of what I am making is very important to the story of Moby Dick.

week 13

What you still need to learn/do for your final project

I want to first say, how I have never really tapped into close reading like this. This class has definitely made me learn a new set of skills when it comes to writing. I need to work on my defining moments in close reading. I have a clear idea of what I want to say, but I get lost in translation when I’m trying to express why it matters. So I think Dr. Pressman’s comments on both of my essays, I will be taking that to heart to make sure I am delivering the best final I can give to her.

I want my ideas to be fully clear because I have so much to say when it comes to my final idea.